"A mere slip of the tongue

In sweet honey dipped" I really like that bit. but in genral I like the second half, more. to me it makes more sence.Cool poem though. short and honey dipped :D

This is awesome! It gives me an idea of what you might mean, but doesn't just blurt it out and ruin the mystery of what every line actually meant. Another very well-written poem.

awesomenessgreat job =)

interesting... I like it.. what's up with the line though?

Flows very well. 2nd half was my favorite. Keep it up.