That was one f*cked up family reunion. It's like a crime show.

luv it~

I was really confused. Like…throughout the whole thing. I didn’t know where they were or who said what or who was…I’m so confused. But I absolutely loved the Alex and Jason kisses and wonderfulness. And I did look over the other chapters and I know WHO's WHO but I still don't know if I can cope with your writing style, I'm going to have to read it twice...I think.

YOU UPDATE NOW BEFORE I HURT YOU! Oh I will be bugging you 24/7 to update! Just so you know... ^_^

Okay, here is my wonderful review that you will love me so much for...if only every person on the face of the universe would stop EMAILING ME! She's asking me what a eunuch is. Whatever...anyways, that's okay, I have to do a drawing of these two people (of whom I am totally jealous of but as long as she paying me I'll do anything) and I have to update and everything! Anyways, they were wonderful chapters I loved them with my whole being...my body, my soul, my insane mind...you get the gist of it right?

(my)Jason: Well, that's the limit of it I suppose. Anyways, hey, you used a quote from Stephen King. "Hey-ho let's go"

Ren: How would you know that?

Jason: Unlike you Ren, I read...I am intelligent. You are a **.

Ren: Excuse me? I am a genius! And in an upcoming chapter I shall show you the extent of my geniusness! And I shall WIN!

Jason: No...Gaki told me who wins and it's not you. Anyways, Little Artemis, there is just something about this story that makes my gut do flip flops, but maybe that's because I'm straight? Why isn't the blind kid running around with a cane or a dog? Wouldn't that be more logical? And he sounds like a middle schooler, not a 15 year old...I mean, GAKI's 15 years old and she's WAY more mature than THAT...of course it is said that girls are YEARS more mature than boys are. I mean, for all we know, she could be more mature than REN is...not me, I mean, I'm 31 years old after all. I like the blind kid, he's definitely one of my favorite characters, and Jason's outfit in this...it's sort of different but reminds me of something I once saw Thad in...

Thad: OH YEAH...that thing...um, well, that was something made by my brother...he told them what to do and how to put it together and they did...so, then I had to WEAR it...and pose for pictures...ew. Anyways, yes, we're watching a movie with a hot guy, I've just GOT to go! RUGBY.

Jason: Whatever...anyways, I liked the chapters I think. I mean, I'm straight and all but I think I liked the "emotion" and all that jazz...and even though I found out that I'm going to die...or be stuck in a coma for 7 years...I'm still reviewing stories and being friends with my terrible author...

What did you just say?

Jason: I said WONDERFUL, my WONDERFUL author!

Ren: Yer in DEEP ** NOW **!

Jason: Aw **! *runs from Gaki and hides under Ren's bed*

*glares as Ren laughs*

Ren: Oh...**!

*beats Ren with his crowbar faster than he can run away*

Jason: *snicker*

Good chapters...heh...

Haha, here is your review! It may not be long though cause I might be going out to dinner...(NO!) *prays for take-out* I love this...love, love, love! And I love how you do the scenes in every chapter, it's not classy but it's wonderful. Anyways, yes, this I find much better than the other one because Jac is nice to Jason. I like the "nice" Jac, and how do you pronouce it? Like "Jack" or like "Jake"? Haha that's funny cause I have characters named Jack and Jake...heehee...anyways (I like the "J" names you know?) this chapter was great cause it gave some of Alex's past...some...but not all and that's good, to keep me reading. It got sorta confusing when you got to the phone part on who was talking and when but maybe I'm just stupid...haha. Yes, stupid. As for Jason and Berlin "luvin'" I'm gonna have to disappoint you. I know, I know...but they're not going to have sex. They're gonna get cuddly...but as for how MUCH cuddling is going on...you'll have to wait and see. Berlin was originally supposed to do something to Jason...that wouldn't just hurt him physically. I dunno, Berlin just might get "offed". *does little Jason eyebrow thingy*

Jason: STOP MAKING FUN OF ME!

Ren: Jason and Berlin, sittin' in a tree...

Jason: *thwaks Ren over the head with his own monster crowbar* Ah...finally some peace and--

Thad: JASON! I heard you just joined the ** squad!

Jason: -_-...*shoots Thad with a tranquilizer gun* Finally--

Berlin: Hey my little Cocabear...

Jason: **!

Its very interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Haha, I have a character named Jason but he's the EXACT opposite of your Jason...'cept fer the height, I think they're about the same in that department. He lives with (and has romantic relationships with), thirty women (that we know of), has dark brown eyes, black hair...but he is sort of suicidal...but he won't cut unless he means some serious business.

As for you being a psycho **? No problem, I get called that a ton too...haha, my pet is a wimp, I know. *sighs in Ren's direction*

Ren: **...just because I'm retired...what are you staring at me for?! I'M ** RETIRED!

Jason (my Jace): Right, you're retired from killing...hmm, it's the pills. *nods* I knew it, the pills are what's keeping you from completely going nutty and bashing in everyone's skulls with a crowbar.

Ren: -_-...that was low.

Jason: Low is my middle name.

Why can't they just get along, I mean YOUR characters get along, I'm about to spaz on Jace, HE'S the one that started this whole stupid thing...*watches her own boys fight* Yeah, I think Ren's bi...only outsidethe story though, oh well, they'll get over it, once I put Jace in a 7 year coma...wait...oops...

Jason: What'd you say?

Nothin'.

ok well interesting but there are quite a few mistakes in here considering you are re-writing this. I think the story is also very tineresting and I love dark sided fition myself but I also think you are a little stereotypical on the gay side a little too often and also almost give the impression that every gay relationship revolves around either raping or being raped combined with cutting and molesting.

I like the story line though. It's original and surprissing which worked in its favor. Please don't take my criticisms too harshly. I just though you'd like to know.

Well done though and keep it up. I'll be back to read more.

YAYS! More of Jason, what the Hell though? Red stilettos? You're one psycho **! Haha...anyways, keep writing or I shall suck out your soul and feed it to my pet...*pets Ren*

Ren: I'M your pet? You **.

This was real food.

~aware!`