 Shazinco 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Lol, I love the second first haiku group. The idea of a series makes me happy, very interesting. |
 ADSpencer 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Wicked. I like. |
 Rave Nightingale 2005-08-24 . chapter 1Unique. Though I like butterflies. But still this is good.
Rave |
 Yuki Sasaki 2005-08-23 . chapter 1Very interesting and deep. Keep up the good work. |
 Searching4Truth 2005-08-23 . chapter 1Wow, that was excellent. Expressive and deep. I loved that. Lol, I feel bad for the butterflies, though. The last haiku really explained everything. Keep writing, you're really good! :-) |
 notated descant. 2005-08-23 . chapter 1well that was... unique. I see nothing wrong with butterfies, but you described what you think well. It was funny too (chemical warfare lmao!) |