Wow, this was lovely. I loved it. Beautifully written, really gorgeous.

Lovely description of the secret. Keep writing!

sad but good, you have a very nice way of writing things x x

aw, the ending was really sweet 'our touch was enough' i liked that

This is intresting, and I can relate to it, sort of. It's good n.n

~Linux

so sad... especially that last line

I like the picture you painted with the poem. Great job!

I like the second half much better than the first.

There should be more.

very nice. i'd write more than that, but sometimes poems don't need a long review because a few words can say everything.

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.