|Reviews for Seconds Secret|
| Plinky 1/11/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this was lovely. I loved it. Beautifully written, really gorgeous.
Lovely description of the secret. Keep writing!
| hann 9/7/05 . chapter 1
sad but good, you have a very nice way of writing things x x
| Thyrt 9/3/05 . chapter 1
aw, the ending was really sweet 'our touch was enough' i liked that
| Artemises Linux 9/2/05 . chapter 1
This is intresting, and I can relate to it, sort of. It's good n.n
| simpleplan13 8/27/05 . chapter 1
so sad... especially that last line
| deletemyaccount2012 8/26/05 . chapter 1
I like the picture you painted with the poem. Great job!
| Fuinixe 8/25/05 . chapter 1
I like the second half much better than the first.
There should be more.
| forgotten-magick 8/23/05 . chapter 1
very nice. i'd write more than that, but sometimes poems don't need a long review because a few words can say everything.
| Faithless Juliet 8/23/05 . chapter 1
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.