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callmebelle 2006-02-02 . chapter 1
this is what i aspire to be... i only wish that i could write as well as you can. amazing.
lovelikeamixtape 2005-11-21 . chapter 1
so you're like my hero. i don't know how you write so amazingly. you use nouns as adjectives & i wish i did that because it's like gahh. yeah. you're too cool.
Kusje 2005-11-17 . chapter 1
gorgeous.
Galadh Niniel 2005-11-12 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I love your new format, it is quite unusual. The wording is perfectly chosen, as usual, quite dense and full of imagery, I love that. The poem is so true, I know this feeling when the loved one cannot be replaced by any other person, I feel this quite acutely at the moment. *sigh*
Plinky 2005-10-28 . chapter 1
Unusual structure - I like it.

I like how the second line "Rubber silk spray..." has no punctuation. It gives it a different feel.

I love the different snapshots through the poem. They're not clear straight away though, it's sort of like you start reading the line, and then you get a picture - like developing a photo. It becomes clearer slowly until you can see what it is.

Great poem, keep writing!
citrus scented 2005-10-14 . chapter 1
love it, i love your style. its really beautiful and graceful, at the same time wired and wicked. "and love is but a translucent call" - pretty imagery.
hey maria 2005-10-11 . chapter 1
I adore this one. The pictures you create with your words...I could actually feel/taste the ash of her lips. Bittersweet; bitter because of the deep deep sadness in it and sweet because it's so beautiful.
not sure yet 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
whoa, interesting set up with this one but i rather like it, it leaves positive but i dont know, very beautifully written and expressive, awesome job
Jessifer1 2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Wow! That is positively intriguing and beautiful. I love this line: "sticky candied kisses run down his face placed along by grinning." So much lovely imagery there.I also wanted to reply to the review you left for my poem/song, "Autumn and Iris and Apnea." I thought you might like to know that I recorded it and it's available here: http://cinnamon-skies.org/autumnirisapnea.mp3
KonekOniko 2005-09-22 . chapter 1
How dare you write awesome poetry while I'm busy doing homework! Seriously, this was like...wow. I envy your poetic ability (especially in dark poetry, I'm so rusty now you could probably hear the hinges squeak)! -ahem- anyways, I love it, memories could last forever, whether bright or painful, I'm just lucky I have more cheerful ones then not ^-^ Heh, amazing as always!

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
katmonkey 2005-09-20 . chapter 1
Sorry I've not reviewed this before. Haven't been on FictionPress in forever. I love how this is split into three. Great work - very abstract. Lime
mizu no kokoro 2005-09-16 . chapter 1
wow... vivid and emotional~~ i'm at awe~

keep writing!
by His blood 2005-09-16 . chapter 1
first of all, i love the new name. ^_^ i was a bit confused at first, but now i'm alright again. thank you for your review, and for your rather spontaneous proposal. ^_~ what can i say? this was beautiful and absolutely brilliant, just like everything else you write. just ... amazing.
BangBangYourDead 2005-09-14 . chapter 1
This was an ok piece. The way it was set confused me. I love your creativity though.
Werewolf Nighteyes 2005-09-12 . chapter 1
Wow. Powerful, abstract sense of imagery. Almost macabre. I like this a lot!
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