|Reviews for rewind|
| Cry Tears of Darkness 8/26/05 . chapter 1
ooh that works well. i like the creativity in this one
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/26/05 . chapter 1
| Aslan Israel 8/26/05 . chapter 1
Rewind was my favorite; the line 'honeyed daggers' really stood out. Just beautiful.
| dancingintherain 8/26/05 . chapter 1
love the unique format- nice job!
| Kakyou Takashiro 8/25/05 . chapter 1
expecting nothingless and finding just that.
| SeaVoi 8/24/05 . chapter 1
This is cool, I like the set up. The three part, you know. It's just cool! :)
| blacktearsofinnocence 8/24/05 . chapter 1
wow, this is great. the metaphors, similes and imaging used in this was awesome. i especially love the line "he disregards her like a broken doll (fleeing from the sirens call)" its so sad yet beautiful at the same time. good job and kw! and i'm glad u enjoy my work. i certainly enjoy urs :D. well, write on forever!
| smile persephone 8/24/05 . chapter 1
You're amazing. Need I say more?
(I will anyway.)
The imagery is exquisite and you still hold your beautifully unique poetic style. I love the 'i, ii, i' and the words after that (hah, directly after and otherwise).
| SayIt'sWrong 8/24/05 . chapter 1
I like this a lot, very passionate and beautiful. I love the formatting and the ending is very powerful. Great work! DOEP aka QueenVixta
| Cloud Burst 8/24/05 . chapter 1
wow thats... abstract.. i feel that there is something missing, but cant quite put my finger on it..
i luv that last stanza, exquisite imagery and detail.
| Moonbeam Elegance 8/24/05 . chapter 1
.*waves* thankyou very much for your kind reviews,they really made my day. D the rest of my haiku collection hadnt appeared when you were reviewing because I had just put them up,anyway maybe you could have a look at the rest? this is a beautiful imagery is so strong it is filling my head with ideas...it is strange,unique and abstract,something which only you could ever i also feel the piece.
| someday-i-will 8/24/05 . chapter 1
O..I like this, it has a nice feeling behind it.
| addie pray 8/23/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Abstract, but strangely familiar. Loved the imagery, honeyed daggers, broken doll/siren's call.
| Blood-Dyed Skies 8/23/05 . chapter 1
Hmm. It seems very surreal (I've been using that word a lot lately..) to me... But in a good way. ) The words you've used and images you have created draws me in and intrigues me- makes me look for a meaning between those lines. I especially like the third stanza- "the butterflies dance around them ( sprawled along the grass ) / honeyed daggats grin above, and love is but a translucent call". That last part seems eerie to me. o.O
| Aquafied 8/23/05 . chapter 1
never can be to better times.
still, fakes dont work as the story of life.