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| Damaged 2005-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow .. this took my breath away. Awesome job!! |
| Yokotaashi 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was heartfelt, i like how the 'worthless' repeats, its like a drill, the 'ectacy is mine' at the end was random, but gave it depth. really like it! |
| girl with rad i o 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseNicely written, though I don't really like the repeating "worthless" after each line. It goes too quickly for my taste, but that's alright. It all depends on what kind of style you like, right? It's a shame people call you worthless. I'm more of what they call... "impossible". xo - rei |