WOW... you have an amazing talent for putting humanity into words while showing it in your own emotion. Great job!
Toodles,
Deep Shadows

Indeed, but what is the worth of impatience? Waiting gives us chance of reflection and impatience allows for no satisfaction regardless of the worth of satisfaction.

lovely. the poem is so beautiful and flows naturally. I adore the line - " these are the lips that escaped / from the wounds of words / and breathed a soul ... " - I thought that was so pretty and utterly gorgeous on your part. I love the utter gramatic tension of the poem which is like a tightly held rope and then it just snaps at the ending. a wonderful gem, simply amazing and superbly written.

~* noelle

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.