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| reader 2008-07-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseTAKE THAT **. Anne got PWNED. Aw, I love your endings. Totally makes up for the fact that the story is over. |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh yay! I was wondering whether Marit would be super ** with Merle + Rafer. |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 9, anon. | abuseWow, that was harsh from Donovan. I LOVE how you always inject the perfect amount of comic relief into your stories!! andnarrowing -> and narrowing primce -> prince gapped -> gaped Coming form --> Coming from “Congratulations”. --> "Congratulations." relived, surprised but relived --> relieved...relieved I’ve the --> I'll have the are them?” --> are there?" Ireally --> I really |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseYAY! happy-ending-fluff-lover-extraordinaire = me too! no-nonsense bighting up to --> brightening up at can and can not --> can and cannot is if --> as if |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseOH NO! AH |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really liked this chapter a lot. served ties --> severed ties Merle marring --> marrying Merle said weekly --> weakly from her facer --> from her face |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseUH OH |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseCute! seemed obvious --> seemed oblivious |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseOoh, Blake? |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseHaha, the irony of "I just might end up being Rafer's sister-in -law!" |
| reader 2008-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay, more stories! I will be so sad when I've finished all your stories. Beginings --> Beginnings thought --> though yeas --> years |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-10-08 ch 13,  | abuseI really like this story, it's so sweet. Especially the ending. Great job! |
| Seraph-of-Nightsong 2007-05-31 ch 13, | abuseI love your stories :) They're all so well thought out. I've been reading them from oldest to newest, this was my latest read. I have one question though... it seems to me as if the time period is based sort of back in history-ish... so it doesn't quite make sense to me for them to have sinks and brush their teeth as we would do... unless of course you mean for their society to be a mix of past and today. Just thought I'd mention that to you! I love your work :) Good Job and Good Luck! |
| sweetone0018 2007-02-17 ch 13, | abuseamazing, by far one of my favorite stories. |
| Miss K Ree 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I think the quality so far is better than your other stories which I've read. I can't wait to see how this procedes. |