I really like this story; Diazien especially creates interest. Please update it!

please finish this story

Still awsome! I like how you used a first person writning style to convey that the chapter was rosemary's writing:) I have a scary story posted too, but I like yours better.

short but informative, keep updating.. i have a feeling this is going to be an awesome story.

Please update soon!!

This seems like a very original vampire story so far. keep up the good work, and continue updating.

Super cool. There is a place where you wrote "a lay a" and I think it's only supposed to be "lay a" but thats all I caught. Of course I can be pretty slow sometimes. Love your stroy keep writing cuz i'm still reading. Oh... and I like the whole spell on the journal thing. The suspence is killing me!

Hi! Nice story! Update soon! Okay, yeah, pathetic review, but my hands are numb from the cold...Heh...Anywayz, please write more!! ^_^

You better keep working on this story. I'm sure this was just the introductory chapter and I loved it. It had a certain flow to it and I really like the way you discribed aspects of the house and of rosemary in an interesting way and not one of those boring discriptions. You keep writing I'll keep reading! :)