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| Blackangle2011 2007-07-09 ch 3,  | abuseplease finish this story |
| silverwingededdie 2005-09-01 ch 3, | abuseStill awsome! I like how you used a first person writning style to convey that the chapter was rosemary's writing:) I have a scary story posted too, but I like yours better. |
| AubriannaKnight 2005-08-30 ch 3, | abuseshort but informative, keep updating.. i have a feeling this is going to be an awesome story. |
| Jess 2005-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease update soon!! |
| AubriannaKnight 2005-08-26 ch 2, | abuseThis seems like a very original vampire story so far. keep up the good work, and continue updating. |
| silverwingededdie 2005-08-25 ch 2, | abuseSuper cool. There is a place where you wrote "a lay a" and I think it's only supposed to be "lay a" but thats all I caught. Of course I can be pretty slow sometimes. Love your stroy keep writing cuz i'm still reading. Oh... and I like the whole spell on the journal thing. The suspence is killing me! |
| WaningMoon 2005-08-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseHi! Nice story! Update soon! Okay, yeah, pathetic review, but my hands are numb from the cold...Heh...Anywayz, please write more!! ^_^ |
| silverwingededdie 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseYou better keep working on this story. I'm sure this was just the introductory chapter and I loved it. It had a certain flow to it and I really like the way you discribed aspects of the house and of rosemary in an interesting way and not one of those boring discriptions. You keep writing I'll keep reading! :) |