This is really great, so simple and yet so wonderful. Excellant work, you really are amazing.

very powerful.. ncie format

awsome - I heart your poems

I love the line structure - the seemingly simple words say so much. Very well done.

-ShadowNemesis

I really like the two middle verses...and the first...um...and the last! lol... _;; but great job and you did a nice job with the rhythm and rhyming...

-lain-

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