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| Sreym 2005-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really great, so simple and yet so wonderful. Excellant work, you really are amazing. |
| simpleplan13 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abusevery powerful.. ncie format |
| fallenangel7809 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuseawsome ^-^ I heart your poems |
| ShadowNemesis 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the line structure - the seemingly simple words say so much. Very well done. -ShadowNemesis |
| SerialXLain 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like the two middle verses...and the first...um...and the last! lol... ^_^;; but great job and you did a nice job with the rhythm and rhyming... -lain- ^_^ |