I didn't know you when this was going on but it really hurts me when I think about it.
What was that line about emotions nailed to bloody brick walls? I'm curious as to what that means. To me it brings the image of you wiping your inflictions on the school wall. :(
Anyways, this is a very sad poem.

Beautiful poem. I especially like the last two lines. Seems oh-so true but you never know. Very well done. :)

Creepy, but totally beautiful--makes my skin crawl. Last line is beautifully fashioned. I love the sound of the words, although I do not completely comprehend their meaning. But that may be because I got up at 4:30 this morning. Other than that, amazing work!

"emotions nailed to bloody brick walls""and laugh softly at your discomfort"

Wow. Those 2 lines carry so much meaning to me that it's just unreal.

such strange emotion,i personally love it, there's somethingabout the stage of losing it and still writing that appeals to me, maybe thats how i got there myself, anywayz, muchly well done, esp the italicized parts

your writing is still amazing that is for sure, though it is good to see you still writing inspiration shall surely come one day. beautiful and wonderfully breathtaking and poignant lines riddle this piece. I love the last three stanzas, positivly divine.

~* noelle

Hmm..I know how you feel about forcing yourself to write (my last poem was the same thing...no inspiration whatsoever). But this is still very very good and I love it...lately I've been fascinated with physical pain (not the teenage angst slashing though) and this is simply amazing :)! Stunning, as all your work! Love, Mia