|Reviews for Candles|
| laughter at the funeral 1/7/06 . chapter 1
it's short yet so concise...and very good metaphors...and i love the dual representations of the candle...that twist in the end is really clever of you...very good job...and pls. do check my poems if you have the time...
| blossomed blooms 8/25/05 . chapter 1
very good, ending made me lift my brows from your clever turn.
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/24/05 . chapter 1
Contemplative, like a stream of thought, natural.