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| BadSweets 2005-08-25 ch 1,  | abuseAww, I like how short this is. Thanks for posting it! |
| girlnheadphones 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abusethis is so...i don't know, but it's just deeper than so many poems on here. somehow you made it deep and simple at the same time, kudos ^^ - please review me back! -girlnheadphones |
| La Gitane 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseShort, but powerful, and the contrast between your well chosen words is made all the more clear because of the length. You manage to get both descriptions and dialogue wrapped very well, and hold an air of enigma with regards to the characters; this really seems to be a tight piece. Good work... |