this is a very powerful peice Kay!! i like it ^_~

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This poem describs exactly how I feel sometimes. It's really good and I get a lot a images in my head as I read this.

Awsome job. I know the feeling when you get an idea for a topic and it just turns into something almost entirly different. Love this, though. Keep it up!

o good poem I think you should make it into a song! It sounds like a song in my head! plz check out my poetry or story 2!