Nice work, chica. Reminds me of how I feel for my girlfriend. WHile reading this poem, however, I found myself getting lost and/or momentarily confused as to the rythim of the poem. Good work, otherwise, tho'!

So true! Great job and thanks for the review! Just Keep Swimming :-D lol

Aw... that was nice ^^ great job, T ^_~

P.S. I FINALLY HAVE AN iPOD! XD i got it today for turning 15... yay! ^^()

~Max W.~

Aw this is so so so so sweet!! I really really like it!! REALLY! It's going on my favorite stories list and you on my favorite authors list!

WRITE ON

caitlyn

Powerful and passioante, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.