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| Alexis LePlume 2005-09-19 ch 4,  | abuseThis is very good! You did wonders with the stroyline, and it's written very well. I really can't think of anything that needs to be improved, other than the fact you seem to be missing a word here and there. Good luck! |
| Shinteki 2005-08-25 ch 2, | abuseEven better than the first chapter one complaint is it takes a while to really get into the story so :> |
| Shinteki 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story with lovely long chapters! I like it!plz check out my poetry and story 2!:> |