I think it would be very good as a prologe. It's very...I can't even think of a word to describe how moving and just...perfect it sounds.

I liked it. The detail was finely crafted and thougth out, while nto to excessive. Beautiful, to the point, and interesting, to say the least.

Keep writing like this and you could be published.

Loved it, right, Mr.Schoodles?

Good job!

ah.. -deep breath-that was so beautiful. if i could cry, i would.i love how the demons were described. i saw them so clearly in my mind's eye. and the smell of rotting flowers is something that never leaves you. i can smell it now.and jesus saved her. how sweet. i believe god, somewhat, abby. i just believe there is a higher power that will love me no matter what i do. as long as i still do nice things. i mean, some saying reading slash is going against god. and i don't think god would hate me or turn against me for something that makes me happy.this story is beautiful abby, and it warms my heart. i shall read it again and again.i love you!

Ai ai ai! this gave me shivers. Your discription is so vivid. It's pretty similar, almost scarily so! Are you my twin sister?

awesome. awesome to the max. read one like this by sardonic whispers. Uncannily similar, you got to read it and be confirmed. awesome and eye popping it's called "Prophecy" your spine will tingle, its so like yours. what a wonderful awesome coincidence