An interesting retelling and a good idea.

There were a few things that bugged me about this story, though. One was the commas - *please* work on knowing when to use them. I found their lack - you omitted a lot of them when, grammatically, they should have been in a specific sentence - confusing and distracting. It detracted from the story.

The other thing that really bothered me was writing out Mudrin's accent. Especially with accent marks. That, too, I found distracting - occasionally writing out inflection or speech impediments is fine, but not every time she speaks. That, too, I found distracting, especially because it made her dialogue very difficult to decipher.

Other than those two issues, it was an interesting fic!

*chuckles* I love it. Espcially the part about hot Irish guys... lol... anyways, this is cool... I'll look at your other works later.

~Lia

"I and my wonderful daughters have been down on our luck since their father was murdered for blood vengeance after killing the Gilldrickssons’ uncle in that towering rage of his." Ingrid laughed lightly." this is my favorite part of the story.