Very good for being two years old!

So, I take it he's dead? hehe I'm just kidding. That's awesome and slightly disturbing, but that's my thing!

wow! that was amazing! i'd totally be proud of that too! and the abrupt ending totally fit with it and the repetition was very effective... my heart is still racing lol...

Oh that's soo sad! *starts crying*

that was beautiful... dark and scary, but beautiful