"propped up by mountains" - that was really nice. put much into perspective. i can't help but admire the intensity of your poetry, crazily ENHANCED by the accessible way its presented. keep writing!

"We forgot that we were only propped up by mountains,blown out of proportion by false ideas."

a wonderful analogy... cool!

actually, i agree about the entering stuff in contests and spoiling with winnings. start a fund, dev. i got a tingly at the end. tinglies happen beyond my control and means GOOD.

im sure clarkey will force you to publish and enter. if not, ask her about it and she'll set you on your way. itd be a good way to get monies, anyways.

I really like how you played with perspectives in this, how depending on our relative placement things can trickily appear different than they are.good work ;)

mezzie

my friend has this theroy that the ants are going to take over...*shakes head* so strange...but believable.

very nice!! i love the idea

You know you should really enter some of your stuff in contests and such and then spoil me whith your winnings! lolok done now~Rae-chan

Interesting... I like it. very well written. Yesh, I like it. great work :)