oh I like that very much. The decription makes me feel nostalgic (especially when you talk about penny arcades). Like it a lot!

So beautiful a writing you have penned.

Given that so much it is the shorline I desire to be near, well, piers are certainly part of the life that I cherish.

This writing takes me to a journey of my mind that desires for me, the all of me to be...and right at present am not enabled...

Each stanza I can visulize...

again, an impressive poem... so sweet...i hope you write many more poems too..

another beauty. i want to describe it with this poetic adjective...but i just cant find the word i wanna use.. sorry..will notify u if i ever remember it.

the imagery used here is awesome. the descriptions strike up a wonderful picture, allowing readers to really see and understand all the motions going on. and the last part was sweet. really romantic..just a little too..err.. dreamy compared to the rest. still, i liked it. im a hopeless romantic. :)

Beautiful, wonderful. I loved this one. I think so far it's my favorite that you have written. I can't think of anything more to describe it!

Thanks for reviewing my poem, I was very surprised to find you there!

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

It was good. Nice descriptions. The only thing that I didn't like about it was the last stanza. It just didn't seem right to me, but that's just me.

Aw... this is lovely! =D I absolutely love this! I really like how you described the "scene of nostalgic reminiscence". =) Very very touching. XP And hm... I like how you did the first stanza too, how you kind of mixed the old and the young together. Interesting, very very interesting. =)