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| Jemima Aslana 2005-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice imagery. I especially liked the line "Perfuming the air with pastels of purple-blue" because you mix scent and colour and it still seems and feels so appropriate. My hat is off to you for this one. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful detail and imagry, I loved it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |