I thought about my friend throughout this poem. I love how you captured the feelings like that. :]

I like this one. And after reading the note at the bottom, I think it applies to anyone who is unsure. Cause after all I think love is a risk, like walking the tight rope without knowing if you'll end up on the other side happily. But what do I know? The closest feeling I know is a giant crush. But even then, you're unsure. I think this poem did your friend justice, so kudos to you!

Thank you, as always,your work touches my heart and soul.

Very sweet and adorable word choice. As usaly your poem flowed smoothly.

Wow its sort but simple and it rhymes too! my poems almost never rhyme... i love it..itz so inspirational

oh interesting. i like the "so foreign it must be wrong, so good it must be right" well love comes in all forms and every one something special. good job

cute,

yeah this is Cheesy Brussle Sprouts from this same site but i was just to lazy to sign in

Kira

amazing piece, good job!

Powerful and passionate, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.