I'm not sure what to make of this poem, but I do like. I'm going to think about it for the rest of the day and probably read it a few more times. (I understand, I just don't know what to make of how you wrote it.) It's good, but something seems...off? Not the best word, but suitable for the moment. Hmm... SCORE: 7.5/10

The Critic, DevilDragon of Pain

Very very powerful. i like it.

That's a beautiful, emotive ending. Very powerful piece, although sometimes I wasn't sure about the flow. Not that I can talk, lol. Good work.

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.