I really like this piece. It was was short and simple but really emotive and thought provoking at the same time. I love your writing style, awesome effort!

It's interesting, the way you expressed loneliness in this piece. I felt you brought the emotion here out really well - with a somewhat disturbing feel to it, albeit a very true interpretation, I must say. Good work.

Ha, me likey, I like the ryhming pattern with a nice rythem, and the dark and cold feel it has.

Joseph

Very nice poem fits in perfectly with my life right now .

Mat

woah, great details and imagery. i love the wording. "..sound of loneliness dripping from the soul?.." awesome. oh, by "jacket tight", do you mean the speaker is in an institution or something? lol, i was just wondering...

the feel of loneliness? not really, usually i'm trying to avoid like most pplz calls, haha c'mon ppl need their alone time :D but nice poem, yeah i like the whole dripping from the soul, good one

Its too short... it would have been nicer if it were um, longer. :D