I really enjoyed this piece. When looking at a lover the background becomes but a meer blur..

Thank you for the review.

Really well described and written. Thankyou for your reviews too and the references.

Aw..this is beautiful! It touched my heart...^^ The ending is superb - it's short but sweet and poignant and so real. Well done!

Hey hey! Firstly, I just thought I'd drop you a line 'cause I'm from Halifax, near Huddersfield, and yeah..I've never yet seen anyone on here from anywhere near me. I like the style you take on in this piece, it's romantic and lyrical. Nice work :)

this is very sweet... i think you've restored my faith somewhat... thankyou.

firstly, just to get it outta the way, thank you so much for reviewing my poem the other day. appreciate it. i considered your suggestion and changed that part of the poem. its not necessarily better now in content but im just trying it out to see if it works.

ok, now, for YOUR poem. this is a beauty! sweetened me to the depth of my heart. it really reflects how powerful and beautiful love is...and it sounds so sincere. the structure and vocab are brilliant too. its just...nice. very nice.

good job! all the best!

a wonderful, happy positive and appreciative poem. I loved it. One tiny suggestion I do have is to refrain from exclamation marks. I think if that second 'to me' didn't have one it would have a bigger effect. I do like how it had a line of its own, like you kept repeating it to make it seem real.

Beautiful and touching, you should write love based poems as a profession, you'd be awesome^_^ R&R me sum time^_^

That is beautiful. I love this. I said in your previous poem (Piers) that it was my favorite. Scratch that. This is my favorite. Especially the ending. It was done perfectly in my opinion!

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

Aw... thats so sweet^^ i'm very happy for you!!(this is a true story rite??) lol~~ great job!!

keep writing!

Beautiful! Excellent! Made me want to fall in love again. Keep up the excelled writing, i luv.

-Shasta Valentine

In a word- Perfect

your such a romantic...great job keep it up!

Yet another sweet piece. =) Really romantic... XP