I like this, the rhyme is cute and it flows nicely. Very cute! I like the rhythm, too. I liked the phrases, too, like "I wish you best in what you'd fare" that was good and fit well.

Awesome job!

Wow. Cool poem. It's kinda funny, but in some cases, very accurate. Though I think that bosses tend to be a bit nicer these days. You've got a pretty good rhythm and the rhyming is "all right." That definitely could be better.

Haha...oh gosh. This is hilarious! =) Too much Chinese and schoolwork, yes? I can relate ^^

Seriously...I was laughing like mad when I was reading it...probably since I was cursing my head off these couple of days at the amount of work we have...and then I open my inbox, sees a author alert, laughs at the title, then reads this poem and erupt into more obnoxious and hysterical laughter XD

"A face you know you cannot maim" *hysterical laughter* I love this line. Seriously. I'm even going to fave this, even though I don't usually fave poems. This is just so darn entertaining! =D

Seriously...even though it's not your best poem, it's definitely the most fun to read (seeing as your other poems are all angsty =P and kinda sad...hahax). Great job! I say let's make it a school anthem and we start singing it whenever the teachers come down on us with too much work! ^^

"...The Anthem! The Anthem! The Song for Working Phantoms!..." MUAHAHAHA! XD

It's not your best work, though it's quite entertaining and certainly humorous. You should try to work on your rhythm here a bit off occasionally - "Have some faith in me, I pray" has better rhythm. Most of the rhyming is well-done and makes sense, though, and I love how you describe the sounds, the pressure..."A face you know you cannot maim" sounds awkward though - the rhyming isn't that great and the meaning is a bit... awkward. Try rewriting this line, you don't have to stick to the same rhyming pattern, after all.Nice work, though I still like "Have some faith in me, I pray" better. ^^

Intresting, very intresting. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.