Jeez. I wish I could write like this. Fantastic.

Woah! that's cool! I like the use of older english style, it really gives it that little bit extra, because that style was so beautiful, and it makes me sad that that language has gone.I like how you did the death, adn the mentioning o it; very cool...very good poem. I like

its beautiful,so many hazy pictures came into my work.

Beautiful. Perfect imagery.

With each new death, comes new life, and with each new life comes death.