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| merrymowmow 2007-02-16 ch 4,  | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update. |
| xanthofile 2006-11-21 ch 4, | abusethis email update has been in my inbox FOREVER. so. if you can forgive me reading and reviewing so late, i can forgive a YEAR AND SEVEN DAYS. *huff* anywho. god damn, i still love this story, and all of paris' little mental notes and ramblings. and you know what, he talks like an indian sometimes. (hey, and innit) but that's just me. >< i think doctor lewis should be kicked in the **. yeah. wonderful update, i still love it! |
| neongoldtooth 2006-10-28 ch 4, | abuseupdate please. so whos paris going to get with, milo or dr lewis?? |
| NOLONGERPOSTING 2006-10-27 ch 4, | abusevery good, interesting...I thought he was going to go after Milo, though? I liked Milo already, though we didn't see much of him. |
| Marylyn-Mercy 2006-09-28 ch 4, | abuseHaha. Cool. Extremely well written...great going. -MM \m/ |
| xxbloody-heartsxx 2006-09-17 ch 4, | abuse*gasp* I love this...for serious. It's quite fantastic. I mean, it has everything I like in fics. Bad attitudes, funny people suffering from near breakdowns, people named Milo. Really. Milo is such an awesome name. I would love this fic even if it sucked just because of Milo. But suck it does not. Much love. |
| Casey 2006-09-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseO What the flipping gods of wall bouncing balls? I love this... why did you tell me about it earlier? How dare you. My like for this story is (-) that much which is a lot in outer space. |
| linn991 2006-09-17 ch 4, | abuseoh no! the doctor? *worried face* so whos hes gonna chose? the doc, or milo? milo is cute, but i have to admit the doc has his charmes too! cant wait to see what happens next! keep it up! xD |
| Somewhere In Between 2006-09-17 ch 4, | abuseWoah this is awesome! i was all worried when i saw the dates from LAST YEAR at the bottom of the page. I was thinking.. "great now that i've goten into the story, it's just going to...die" But YAY! its not so Alex will live to see yet another day -dun dun dun-Wow, talk about a random review... but I'm just in a random mood I suppose.Either way this story kicks!!Alex |
| linn991 2006-09-10 ch 3, | abusegreat story! milo is an adorable name and really fits the guy. the last bit was the cutest, with the teachers comment on milo blushing! adorable! please update soon! |
| Nolaknowsmyname 2005-09-13 ch 2, | abuseOk, here I am reviewing another of your stories, which so far is ok, but I would really love to see the end of TWAB and some more on PDA. No, no, I'm not pushing, plz don't worry, lol, OK, I'm pushing. PUSH PUSH PUSH lol. This is interesting so far, let's see where it goes. |
| shadowedskies 2005-09-10 ch 3, | abuseOoh. This is cute! Reminds me of some of the boys at my school which makes it much more vivid and interesting. Please do keep writing this lovely little story and i will die happy. ^__^ |
| AppLEaves 2005-09-09 ch 3, | abuseMilo!? -crows- SO cute. Just like Ovaltine, but way sweeter. Chocolate and emo glasses... I never knew they could fit this well. -Sugar |
| ddz008 2005-09-08 ch 3, | abuseGREAT STORY!I liked it XDBoth of them are great!Milo is so cute and sweet! :)And Paris is so funny!! XDHope to see the next chapter pretty soon, please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| xanthofile 2005-09-08 ch 3, | abuseoh, i love the last little bits of this chapter! that was great, that Milo kissed him to get rid of him. *snickers* hope this fic updates soon...yeah. |