I thought it was very well written. I'm no expert on poetry but I enjoyed it.

Cute and sweet. The poem is so heroic and epic, if you get what I mean. I , myself, admire the character you are describing in this piece. I know many like him, they deserve an award.

now that's a poem I can easily relate with...

gusto ko yung takbo nung poem, maganda...

all in all, madaling makaka-relate mga readers mo...