no...no...*giggle giggle* *stare*

Metallic huh? I really like your imagery in this. This poem is one of the most original and talented works I've ever seen. I used to see the purity in something like virginity... I've long forgotten what it's like to consider myself sacred. Hmm...

Wow, this is definitely some of the finer work I've seen from anyone, not just you.

I absolutely LOVED "open legs holding Jaws of Life," I thought that was a really good metaphor.

The last line was definitely my favorite though. I think I understand the meaning of this poem... somewhat, though I'm not entirely sure. I'd like to ask you.

It kind of reminds me of The ** Monologues. In a good way.

I'm absolutely amazed that you can write something so deep and profound without sounding seedy. I can't really explain properly because I am unsure myself, but I just love the way this isn't just about sex, it's so much more. "Glitter smacks the inner walls of the Metallic womb" - that line really hit me. This is intriguing, mature and wonderfully written.

Why would you write about your **! I dont get! but each to their own! i dont no what to think bout this piece i dunno wat to say! but i just wanna say the comment you left me callin my work teeny bopish

I can't understand why you would write about this, and like usualy I have to red it eight times to understand Nice though...

your poems always take me into another world, this surreal world, that's actualy real..if that makes sense. i feel really bad that other people won't except Sharon. but yes this was lovely. ~jess