a very good piece. I like how you made it flow so nicely. awesome work!

~Sorrow~

flipping amazing.i held my breath,had to let it out at the end.the format makes it all the more eye catching.i adore it.

moonbeam e

Powerful, and with a quality of truth.

Wow, this is breath taking. I love the format as well.

so true. god, this was amazing and really just opens ones tightly closed eyes. gorgeous, fabulous and wonderfully written. I love it.

~* noelle

wonderful. amazing in all it's truth.

interesting. those last two lines made the whole poem all over again.

cliched ugly thing. society's cruel.