Heya! Nice story! A few errors but whatever. Like the perspective that you wrote it from.

-Alex

OK... so I didn't realize there was another chapter -_-'. Though, you really have me interested in this piece now... can't wait to read the next chapter!

Talk about DIFFERENT. That was actually really good... except the word "hobo" was used a bit too much... but maybe that was just me *shrugs* That was really good though... I hope you turn it into something more. I wouldn't leave it to end just there. Keep it up!