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| Milesbelle 2007-06-26 ch 19, anon. | abuseyour story sucks... why? but i think you may improved next... |
| emowalnutx3 2007-04-11 ch 19, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS THE BEST ENDINGS OF HE STORIES YOU HAVE WRITTEN. OH MY GAWH. I LOVE SAD ENDINGS! THEY MAKE ME CRY! :] |
| greenfoundation 2007-02-01 ch 19,  | abuseOh noo! Thanks! Now I'm Crying! haha, aww the ending was sweet ... Cant believe she died... yes ... I really am crying, tis not a lie. Ohyeah, the new story you're doing..whats it called... um, Playing The Game? Dont make anyone die! Lol, okay, well, bye! |
| DorKiyki 2006-09-16 ch 2, | abusehey...i got ur review...at first i was really offended but you tell me this so i can improve on my writing skills and i thank you for tat. so...if it's alright w/ u...can u be my editor? i mean it's been a while since i started writing stories. like u said on ur profile thing..my english, gammer and so forth, aren't that great as well.lol. the thing w/ me is i have all these great plots in my head, but when it comes to typing it, it's just a blur.in the beginning of your prolongue..i was confused rather the person "I" was a guy or a girl and then when it was chapter 1 the "I" suddenly became dior. from time to time i flipped back to the prolongue and clarified my understanding.lol. -_-" this is wat we get for typing eh? lol...buh if u look aside from the mistakes and grammer errors, u understand wat the authour is trying to tell the readers.lol.i can't wait to read "If you loved me enough" though =D |
| DorKiyki 2006-09-15 ch 11, | abuseOMG HIL! i luv ur story!lol.i was so wrapped up that i was in my own little world trying to imagine the story! lol...&& i couldn't even hear my parents calling me!lol. you can tell how great ur story is! i especially luv the beginning were Dior had to french Devante for like 20 mins. and when she found out about "The Ones" lol! |
| chosenchic 2006-06-25 ch 19, | abuseAfter like a million years, I've finally gotten around to reaidng this story and the verdict... it's pretty good. A couple of errors here and there but I like all of your characters and it was short and sweet. Anyways thanks for keeping up with TUV and once again, good story. |
| Zenosknight 2006-06-07 ch 2, | abusehey Hilary, Wow, this story is great! I'd be honored to be your editor. =P Anywho, if you have any more storys, be sure to contact me, for I would do the same since I made an account. Obviously, my username is Zenosknight... Have fun writing -Lokyeu XD |
| unrequitedx 2006-04-15 ch 19, | abuseoh my god. . . this story is so sad. |
| unrequitedx 2006-04-15 ch 5, | abusei see someone is pretty flirtanious. xD |
| anon 2006-01-13 ch 19, anon. | abuseQuestion, umm I don't think that there would be enough blood in a human body to write a whole song, or that it would flow smoothly enough, or that a DYING person would have the coordination to write anyway. Yeah. |
| ms. fuzzy 2005-12-08 ch 19, | abusewhoa hilary scary. I liked it but it was so dark. I was hoping that dior would live but still, it was nice... i'll have nightmares. |
| ms. fuzzy 2005-12-08 ch 5, | abuseScary action Hilary. well im so not gonna review every chapter if i wanna finish this. Still very good so far except for like two spelling mistakes. :) |
| ms. fuzzy 2005-12-08 ch 2, | abuseHilary, this just stinks of you! Expression... Its very nice. Very humorous. Well dunno wat to say, not done reading it yet. |
| judy 2005-11-29 ch 5, anon. | abusei love this. when arae they going to bangg |
| judy 2005-11-29 ch 3, anon. | abusefreaking amazing. hahhaha you have skills. i'd've loved to be in her position. IN A CAMPSITE FULL OF BABES? YEAH MAN. :D |