your story sucks...
why?
but i think you may improved next...

THAT WAS THE BEST ENDINGS OF HE STORIES YOU HAVE WRITTEN. OH MY GAWH. I LOVE SAD ENDINGS! THEY MAKE ME CRY! :]

Oh noo!


Thanks! Now I'm Crying! haha, aww the ending was sweet ... Cant believe she died...

yes ... I really am crying, tis not a lie.

Ohyeah, the new story you're doing..whats it called... um, Playing The Game?

Dont make anyone die! Lol, okay, well, bye!

hey...i got ur review...at first i was really offended but you tell me this so i can improve on my writing skills and i thank you for tat. so...if it's alright w/ u...can u be my editor? i mean it's been a while since i started writing stories. like u said on ur profile thing..my english, gammer and so forth, aren't that great as well.lol. the thing w/ me is i have all these great plots in my head, but when it comes to typing it, it's just a blur.in the beginning of your prolongue..i was confused rather the person "I" was a guy or a girl and then when it was chapter 1 the "I" suddenly became dior. from time to time i flipped back to the prolongue and clarified my understanding.lol. -_-" this is wat we get for typing eh? lol...buh if u look aside from the mistakes and grammer errors, u understand wat the authour is trying to tell the readers.lol.i can't wait to read "If you loved me enough" though =D

OMG HIL! i luv ur story!lol.i was so wrapped up that i was in my own little world trying to imagine the story! lol...&& i couldn't even hear my parents calling me!lol. you can tell how great ur story is! i especially luv the beginning were Dior had to french Devante for like 20 mins. and when she found out about "The Ones" lol!

After like a million years, I've finally gotten around to reaidng this story and the verdict... it's pretty good. A couple of errors here and there but I like all of your characters and it was short and sweet.

Anyways thanks for keeping up with TUV and once again, good story.

hey Hilary, Wow, this story is great! I'd be honored to be your editor. =P Anywho, if you have any more storys, be sure to contact me, for I would do the same since I made an account. Obviously, my username is Zenosknight... Have fun writing -Lokyeu XD

oh my god. . . this story is so sad.

i see someone is pretty flirtanious. xD

Question, umm I don't think that there would be enough blood in a human body to write a whole song, or that it would flow smoothly enough, or that a DYING person would have the coordination to write anyway. Yeah.

whoa hilary scary. I liked it but it was so dark. I was hoping that dior would live but still, it was nice... i'll have nightmares.

Scary action Hilary. well im so not gonna review every chapter if i wanna finish this. Still very good so far except for like two spelling mistakes. :)

Hilary, this just stinks of you! Expression... Its very nice. Very humorous. Well dunno wat to say, not done reading it yet.

i love this.

when arae they going to bangg

freaking amazing.

hahhaha you have skills.

i'd've loved to be in her position. IN A CAMPSITE FULL OF BABES? YEAH MAN.

:D