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| simpleplan13 2005-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting.. I like it |
| myno 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseso tender. Beautiful poem. |
| Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseSuch a wonderful poem!! I really like the part, "You put My mind to rest," and "What dreams If any Are wont To become reality?" I really could place myself in the poem, looking at my own husband while he is sleeping. -Kat |
| Abby Sequioa 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abusewonderfuly written, good word usage.. good job! |