I like the old english used in it. Pretty cool! ^_^

This is very nice, I like it.

i seldom see contemporary writers writing in this style anymore..but it seems to have been well-managed...stoically beautiful in its own way..keep writing =D

The Shakesperean language creates more romantic effect in the poem. This is very good, keep it up.

~~Trinity

Powerful and passionate, I really love how you added a real classic tone to this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.