This is really good, you're an amazing poet. I like the repeated lines, they're awesome!

Rock on!

Hey! You haven't put up any new poetry so I thought I'd review the older ones I forgot! I like this a bunch, it's got awesome metaphorical things, especially the first verse-thing. Really cool imagery in that! I also like the chorus, it's awesome, I like the last line of it. I can't think of anything constructive for this one, so ROCK!!

Blessed be!

Oh, and I almost forgot! Thanks for reviewing "Cloak of Lies"! Are you sure there's nothing wrong with it? Absolutely, positively sure? Because if there's anything at all, no matter how minor, I want to hear it...because I'm weird, or something...anyway...rock on!

Deep, and well-detailed, I like it, and yes I recognize that you exist, good way to get my attention though. I loved the line about how beauty meets her death; beauty is so staged, we should have a revolution and reinvent the whole idea.

Much love,Juliet.