I loved the consistent reference to gold and sunnish things. the second half had an interesting, more spontaneous sort of passion in contrast to the first's warmer, more languid mood. as usual, excellently done.

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i am going to assume that you are dreaming about a special someone that it seems so real but when you wake up, you realize that it was only a dream. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

Powerful and passionate, I loved your play on mood and intensity. keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.