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| Darlingdeath 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, great work as always... I realy like the last... And in my black widow poem, I didnt mean to make it sound like all self-injurers are masochistic... just me... but thanks for the review :D |
| account not in use 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI love the feeling I get from this |
| Matt Sheard 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. It portrays a mixture of confusion yet extremem happiness, perhaps even a hint of fear, for if you don't know the reason the other person likes you, how can you make sure you stay that way, how can you be sure that person doesn't stop loving you? That's the impression I got anyway. The last two lines are the icing ont he cake. Brilliant. Matt |
| Jesse k 2005-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethe caring is easy, the last line covers that. streight comes to you often, you surpass me in it in a lot of things. your wiser then you know. i cant really say "i love you" cause you already put it in there, so um,...OH! ^^ 143! hehe. hang in there. |