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Evelyn Tan
2005-08-28
ch 1,
Hm... yet another interesting one. There're either 2 guns here, or you're killing yourself. o.O I'm picking the second choice. I like you spaced the last sentence out too. It kind of caused me to think it in a hesitant way. Like someone doubting something, but then not so sure of his own stand as well. =)
les petits bateaux
2005-08-26
ch 1,
This is very tragic and sad. Who killed who here?

~~Trinity
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