Reviews for Underneath the Covers

Reviews For: Underneath the Covers

the pirateKing 2008-08-03 ch 1,	ahh this was so cute :] hehe thanks for sharing!
The Astronaut 2007-03-03 ch 1,	Wow, this is excellent. Pretty imagery. Nice and simple, and it really works. Love it! xoxo, The Astronaut
aiur 2005-10-06 ch 1,	you're brilliant at one in the morning. haha. this is really beautiful. i love it. your style is amazing and it really carried the entire thing. it was really sweet. sorry about the awful review. i'm usually better than this (okay maybe not). heh. but i really enjoyed it. nice work. =) ~k8
Thorn's-girl 2005-10-04 ch 1,	I. Love. This. You have no idea. You've managed to capture something here, and I think I'll call it autumn, not because that is the season in the piece, but because...I really don't know why. Whatever the reason, it is beautiful, elegant, and I think I am in love with it...:D
citrus scented 2005-09-12 ch 1,	beautiful, intense , touching and imensly passionate. loving and elegantly written, love it. "I want to be able to take the pictures from my head and put them in hers" just so expression and overwelming. a very delicate and moving piece, beautiful.
Doray 2005-09-09 ch 1,	Refreshingly cute.
perishedfeelings 2005-08-28 ch 1,	When did you write this? I almost completely overlooked it, I thought it was an older story. xD I love the way you describe things, it's beautiful.
onlyshallow 2005-08-27 ch 1,	oh, oops. thanks for pointing that out, faye. :D it's hard to catch things when you're tired. ^_^;;
Virginia Giselle 2005-08-27 ch 1,	I like it. It's pretty. Perhaps you're typing it underneath the covers because it's 1 AM?
Evelyn Tan 2005-08-27 ch 1,	I love this, except for the description part. Well, the grammar in the description part, to be more specific. You started out with present tense. And then, kind of went to past tense, which made it really weird. o.O Hm... it starts changing about here: When the chords ended... Could you try revising that? o.O It'll be perfect if you did. =) I really like this.

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