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| violent affectionist 2007-05-05 ch 1, | hmmhmm.. i like the way this burns at the end, In the knowledge you lost the race. I smile contently at you. |
| born-again 2005-08-31 ch 1, | "But I cannot help, the way I live, It’s all I’ve got that’s left to give," is a brilliant phrase, could say so much, but is still very simple. |
| Aquafied 2005-08-28 ch 1, | The faceless die in droves,The wings come off your peaceful doves,Your pain is meat and blood is wine,-doves. peace. blood is wine. kind of reminds me of jesus, but more of something else. first two lines i love, reminds me of a song. Don't love or love another way-perfect. |
| IgnitedIcicle 2005-08-27 ch 1, | only thing i can think is "sometimes when you lose, you win" ~ What Dreams May Come |
| account not in use 2005-08-27 ch 1, | The words you use and the way you use them is so...eerie, I think, is the right word. |