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Reviews For: The fire floods around and through

violent affectionist
2007-05-05
ch 1,
hmmhmm..
i like the way this burns at the end,
In the knowledge you lost the race.
I smile contently at you.
born-again
2005-08-31
ch 1,
"But I cannot help, the way I live,

It’s all I’ve got that’s left to give," is a brilliant phrase, could say so much, but is still very simple.
Aquafied
2005-08-28
ch 1,
The faceless die in droves,The wings come off your peaceful doves,Your pain is meat and blood is wine,-doves. peace. blood is wine. kind of reminds me of jesus, but more of something else.

first two lines i love, reminds me of a song.

Don't love or love another way-perfect.
IgnitedIcicle
2005-08-27
ch 1,
only thing i can think is "sometimes when you lose, you win" ~ What Dreams May Come
account not in use
2005-08-27
ch 1,
The words you use and the way you use them is so...eerie, I think, is the right word.
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