a very good piece. sometimes people have to notice even the littlest things. great work

~Sorrow~

your poem makes me think of Rosa Parks' recent passing, although the poem has a sadder ending. are all your poems written in thsi format?

I love how you make something normal so interesting and the images are so perfect.

everyone finally noticed.

for once.something was not there at all.

when lonely is a life of misery.hope is to be faithful.

beautiful.

I lvoe it ^.^

*smiles like a fool* the ending just makes me want to hug someone, I am much the same on a bus and this made me think of times that would happen. sweet, I really think it is toward the end, while portraying a very 'normal' scene beautifully.

~* noelle