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Kiki Idiot-on-a-stick 2009-01-03 . chapter 2
YOU ARE FREAKING ME OUT! DO I KNOW YOU OR SOMETHIMG?! Seriously, you are saying where I live (Hawaii) the word in my book, my favorite bands, the bullying and image of Kitana. I'm scared. Do you live in Hawaii, go to Konaweana High? Or used to for that matter? Do you know a girl called "The Nerd"?
Kiki Idiot-on-a-stick 2009-01-03 . chapter 1
Uh... Kitana is a name in my book. Its kind've the female human's lable in a familiar relationship. Great minds think alike huh?
Mojojuju 2007-05-14 . chapter 6
I really, really, *really* like this story. :] Off to my favourites it goes! :]


-- J.
Shadowless Rain 2007-01-27 . chapter 6
Heehee, loved it.
I like Kai, he sounds cute.:D
Update soon!
ChibiRebel 2006-11-13 . chapter 2
Even though I have only read 2 chapters, This fanfic is really really interesting. Although it is a bit of a cliche, yes, the cross-dressing girl. But then again, almost every thing in anime and or manga is a cliche. Eh, anyway, GOOD JOB. Continue this story!
LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-09-01 . chapter 4
lol!! update soon! this story is pretty good!
hmm. 2006-08-07 . chapter 5
Well, there was no bribery involved as the previous review had stated--you were just simply stating that you had no motivation to continue the story, if people wanted more maybe you'd think about adding more on. Anyways, i'm sick of the whole girl in an all boys school, even if they are disguising themselves or not, cause they have to find out eventually...anyways, its just so overdone and I wanna sometimes slap people to get them to start thinking of something more original! (no offense, I dont want to slap you haha) but anyways, just giving my two cents. So yeah, I like your other stories, very nice, so...yes, that is all :]
The Black Dhalia 2006-08-07 . chapter 5
No offense, but it's pretty stupid to stop a story just because you get no feedback. You shouldn't write so then people can give you compliments. You should write because you want to. To post it on the internet is so then people can judge you, to see if you can improve in anyway. So, you shouldn't really stop this story.

P.S. When you say that if no one reviews in the next month, and that you'll take this story off, that's bribery if you really think about it.
Kakyou Takashiro 2005-12-31 . chapter 2
hm. a fun and delightful read. please continue. ^^ happy new year!

kakyou
Elie Koyahama 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Sorry... typo... i meant all boy school XDhope you'll update soon
Elie Koyahama 2005-11-07 . chapter 2
really interesting ^^ one girl in an old boy school... sounds like fun =P
Evil-Ramen-of-Doom 2005-11-06 . chapter 2
i like it please continue!um is the guy with amber eyes abd chesnut hair from the band? i hope so!
Maiya 2005-09-05 . chapter 2
Hiya! Wow, I like how your story's turning out. It has good potential! I hope you would continue!
Pugz 2005-09-03 . chapter 2
Hello! ^_^ I have come to review and give judgement! lol. Very good so far, i'm loving the plot. A girl in an all boys school, very nice. Keep up the good work as i will keeping an eye on it :P bye bye
Twilight Galaxy 2005-09-02 . chapter 2
Well, the going into a all boy's school is cliche but Kitana isn't dressing up as a boy so, it is sort of original. And the microwave incident. That is really clever and original. Are the girls who set the fire going to be found out?

And shouldn't she overreact a little more when she was informed that she was going to attend an all-boy's school? Oh, is she going to have a roommate? If she is, then is the boy going to be the boy is the band thingy?

Update!
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