wow... this is really deep and emotional i love it.

wow, very frantic, but not lacking in detail, fast paced, but there is still time to notice the riveting detail. I imagine you screaming this as you recite it. Brilliant stuff mate. Yeah, Ive been gone for too long, But Im makin a come back, I have hundreds of things to post and so little time. And I was thinkin', I GOTS to read some of goth-girl's stuff. Sure enough, your stuff still rules. Well, alls I haves to say is, "AArgh, me heartie, Aargh."

Very, very sad but I like it.

wow.. very powerful piece.. I like it a lot.. especially the ending

whoa. wow. totally not what I expected, and I love it.

how mean

This may sound horrible, but while the last bit tugged at my heart, it also made me laugh...