wow. this is one of your best pieces. i love it. "And now I’ll wish upon a star/ That this won’t leave you with a scar." that was my favorite part, along with the last four lines. amazing job. k/w

in memory of him,~shadow

That was hot, you're awesome at the poetry part

Your right this is one of your best ones.. I really like this one, it is very good... pretty darn sure I know who you are talking about... but am I right? The one that you often talk about with me. Or is it me? Hey, if I ever do something like that to you, please confront me, I may not be happy about it at the time (or maybe I will) but please tell me if you ever feel like I'm doing that to you. Anyhow this is very well written. Keep up the good work. God bless. *hugs* Love,Liz

Deep. Sounds like something I wrote about my friend...actually mine's a lot more mean and hateful...yours is...depressingly sad it seems. I like it though.

Wow. Amazing. Keep writing!

~Anna~