it fits. it works with your writing...

This is a good story. And no, it's not weird that you switched to Fin's POV (i keep wanting to spell Fin with two n's.) in this chapter. I enjoyed it.

Woah, i actually really enjoyed reading this story so far man, I hope you do more updating soon!

I think you have a really great start and a really good writing style!

hiya

i'm wondering why you are re-writting this story. Its very good. All i can say though is your first three chapters are really good even better than before.

Keep updating.

Angel

I don't understand why there isn't more to the story. I looked at the reviews and there are reviews from chapters like 49 and stuff, but right now it's only three chapters. There is no authors notes or anything on your profile... And it says it's complete. Are you working on getting it published, and took it off--or are you rewriting it? --Maybe there is a glitch? Either way, I really like what I've read so far. You created the characters to be so realistic. Even with the depth of their emotions, they don't come across like annoying depressed teens. You've got a real talent, something I envy. Great job.
Avid.
Post Script: I'm going to put this on alert, just in case.

THIS IS SO AWESOME!

aww i loved that ending, it was hilarious!

aww, thats so sweet that Walker would say that he loves Syd and risk his job, reputation, and his career just to make her feel better! YAY - go Walter!

i really hope Fin goes back and tell his parents, although it kinda sound like he just saying he will because syd is there, i dont think hell actually tell anyone. i dont know though, ill just have to hurry up and read!

that really takes some guts. to sit there and leave stuff behind and write a will and every thing and know that those people are going to comae after you and that theres a big chance that hed die. i dont know i i could have done it.

...thats...so sad. alec was one of my favorite characters, and even though he is just a character, im tearing up right now.

jeez, this story is so good that on every chapter ive wanted to leave a review, but im so wrapped up in the story that i forget. so, this chapter i decided to review first. anyways, ill probably leave three more reviews so that youll have 500, after that, im definatly adding this story to my 500+ reviews community! yay, now back to the story!

I'm really liking the story so far ;]
It's pretty good tbh..

And Jimmy Edwards?
I'm thinking someone watches some One Tree Hill?

And if not.. That's a big coincidence..

omg! that was so good! How can you leave it off like that though? What happened with Sydney and Fin? Done for good?