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Reviews For: The Poison

Katasaki 2006-01-04 ch 1,	abuseHey there! This story has some good potential and I think in some ways it would be better if you carried it on to discover what happened. But then it works as a stand alone too. I think the hallucinations were good and the idea was nice. My only disapointment is that you finish the story before we discover why it was happening. Oh, and thanks for adding me to your Favourite Author's bows I'll be updating again soon.
rachel 2005-09-26 ch 1, anon.	abusei loved it some things were spelled wrong but every good writer dose things wrong sometimes but it was very good i liked it alot
marcus 2005-09-11 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is an awesome story. I really like how you used creative imaging with all of sam's hallucinations. I can't wait for your next story.
Loren 2005-09-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story. it is so good. I want to hear more! :)
Arter 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI like this one a lot. I'm looking forward to your upcoming works, hopefully they're as creative as this one. The writing itself can use a bit of work, but it's a very good story.