great story so far...i love it...u actually rote 2 chapters 2day!!keep writing!

Nice. A little choppy, but good all the same. I cna't wait for the next chapter.

amazing story, a little fast paced but it has to be in this situation. Just keep in mind that you have to put detail into your work so that later on, the story is not so fast paced but like I said, it has to be in these early chapters. Great amazing wonderful story, I like.

ouch, yeah divorcing parents can be... ouch. Great plot line, interesting main character, wonderful story, ch. 2 now...

i like this . update soon =]

Oh wow, that's really cool, I like this story quite a lot so far. Especially Maddie's younger sister. Hope you continue it!